Report Card Comments for ESL and ELL Students (By Proficiency Level)

Writing report card comments for English Language Learners requires a mental shift that many teachers find difficult: you need to separate language proficiency from content knowledge. A student who can't write a paragraph in English might have a sophisticated understanding of fractions. A student who speaks haltingly in class might be reading complex texts in their home language.

Your comments need to reflect both dimensions — where the student is in their language development and how they're doing with grade-level content. Here's how.

The critical distinction: language vs. content

Before writing any ELL comment, ask yourself two separate questions:

1. Where is this student in their English language development? (listening, speaking, reading, writing)
2. How is this student performing in the subject content? (math concepts, science understanding, social studies knowledge)

These are different things. Conflating them is the most common mistake in ELL report cards. A student who "struggles in math" might actually understand the math perfectly — they just can't read the word problems yet.

Comments by proficiency level

Newcomer (entering/beginning)

Students at this level are brand new to English. Many are in a "silent period" where they absorb language but produce very little. This is normal and should not be framed as a problem.

• [Student] is in the early stages of English language acquisition and is making a strong adjustment to their new learning environment. They communicate using gestures, pictures, and single words, which is appropriate and expected at this stage.
• [Student] demonstrates understanding of classroom routines and follows visual and modeled instructions. They are building a foundation of basic English vocabulary through our daily language activities. In their home language, they show strong [subject] knowledge.
• [Student] is currently in the silent period of language acquisition, which is a normal and productive stage. They are actively listening and absorbing English. I see evidence of comprehension through their responses to visual prompts and their ability to follow routines.

Emerging

Students are beginning to produce short phrases and simple sentences. Errors are frequent and expected.

• [Student] is progressing well in their English language development. They now communicate in short phrases and simple sentences during structured activities and are beginning to participate in partner discussions with peer support.
• [Student] is building their academic vocabulary in [Subject] and can label diagrams, complete sentence frames, and respond to questions with one- to two-word answers. Their comprehension is noticeably stronger than their production, which is typical at this stage.
• [Student] shows growing confidence in speaking English. They volunteer answers during group activities and are beginning to take risks with new vocabulary. Their writing is emerging — they can produce simple sentences with support from word banks and models.

Developing

Students can communicate in complete sentences and participate in academic conversations with scaffolding. Written work is becoming more independent.

• [Student] communicates effectively in social situations and is making strong progress with academic English. They participate in class discussions using complete sentences and are developing the ability to explain their thinking, especially in [Subject].
• [Student] reads grade-level texts with support and demonstrates good comprehension through graphic organizers and guided questions. Their independent reading level is [level], which represents significant growth from [previous level] at the start of the term.
• [Student] writes organized paragraphs with a clear main idea and supporting details. Grammar errors are still present — particularly with verb tenses and articles — but these are developmentally appropriate and improving steadily. Their ideas and content knowledge are strong.
• [Student] excels in [Subject] when language demands are scaffolded. Their content understanding is at or near grade level. As their academic vocabulary grows, they will need less scaffolding to demonstrate their full ability.

Expanding

Students communicate fluently in most academic situations. They still benefit from support with complex academic language, especially in writing.

• [Student] communicates with fluency and confidence in English. They participate fully in class discussions, use academic vocabulary appropriately, and can explain complex concepts in [Subject] with clarity.
• [Student] reads grade-level texts independently and demonstrates strong comprehension. They can identify main ideas, make inferences, and support their thinking with textual evidence. Their next growth area is analyzing author's purpose and rhetorical strategies.
• [Student] writes well-structured essays with clear arguments and relevant evidence. Occasional errors with complex grammar (conditional sentences, passive voice, academic transitions) are still present but do not interfere with meaning. Their writing voice is developing nicely.
• [Student] is performing at grade level in [Subject] and their language skills are increasingly indistinguishable from those of their native-English-speaking peers in most classroom situations.

Bridging

Students are approaching native-like proficiency. Subtle differences may still appear in academic writing and specialized vocabulary.

• [Student] demonstrates near-native English proficiency across all language domains. They are ready to be fully assessed using grade-level standards without language accommodations in most subject areas.
• [Student] produces academic writing that is clear, organized, and grammatically accurate. Their remaining growth areas are subtle — nuanced vocabulary choices, idiomatic expressions, and the register shifts required in formal academic writing.
• [Student] is a strong student who happens to be bilingual — a significant cognitive and cultural asset. Their performance in [Subject] reflects genuine content mastery, and they are meeting or exceeding grade-level expectations.

What to include in every ELL comment

Regardless of proficiency level, strong ELL comments address these elements:

1. Current proficiency level — Where are they in their language journey?
2. Growth this term — What progress have you observed, even if it's small?
3. Content knowledge — How are they doing with the actual subject matter, separate from language?
4. Home language as an asset — Acknowledge bilingualism as a strength, not a barrier
5. Specific next step — One concrete thing the student is working toward

Affirm the home language

This matters more than many teachers realize. Parents who speak a language other than English at home sometimes worry that they're holding their child back. Your comment can reassure them.

• "I encourage you to continue reading and having rich conversations in [home language] at home. Strong skills in a first language directly support English development."
• "[Student]'s bilingualism is a genuine academic strength. Their ability to think across two languages supports their problem-solving and comprehension skills."

Common mistakes to avoid

Treating the silent period as a problem

New English learners often go through a silent period lasting weeks or months. This is not defiance, shyness, or a learning disability. It's a normal stage where they're absorbing the language.

Grading language instead of content

If a student can solve the math problem but can't explain their work in English, that's a language issue — not a math issue. Your comment should reflect that distinction.

Using vague language about progress

"Making progress" means nothing without specifics. Instead: "Has moved from single-word responses to producing complete sentences during structured partner activities."

Comparing to native speakers without context

"Below grade level in reading" is misleading if the student has been learning English for six months. Include context: "Currently reading at a [level], which represents strong progress for a student in their first year of English language instruction."

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